My evolution in Electronic Literacy
OUTLINE:
INTRODUCTION:
My point of view about Electronic tools.
Paragraph 2:
All the electronics tools that I had been used
Paragraph 3:
Aspects that I love and I hate about electronic tools
Paragraph 4:
The electronic tools and my major
CONCLUSION:
My own objectives using electronics tools.
Why a lot of people nowadays use electronic tools? Definitively the electronic tools are the most amazing invent, fortunately or unfortunately all the world is involve in this invent. Obviously all the aspects related with the electronic tools can be good or bad talking especially the internet. In my personal point of view the good aspects of the electronics tools are: It is easy to find a lot of useful information, pictures, books and more, you can have communication with people around the world, you can create your own space for showing to the world your personality or your work (talking about academic areas), but everything has a dark side. Nowadays it is very common to find sites, where some people use the electronics tools in a negative way. Sometimes the use of these sources is for earn money doing illicit acts. For this reason I consider good and amazing, moreover bad and destructive the electronic tools. In the following essay you will find my experience using this kind of tools, the things that I love and hate of them and the importance of that the electronic tools have in my major.
My experience using electronic tools is very conventional. I had been used the electronic tools most of the times by academic purposes. The electronic tools that I have been using are: Translator, I consider that the use of the translator is wonderful, obviously only for looking for specific words in this way you can increase your vocabulary, which you will apply in compositions and academic works. Other tool that it is similar to the translator, is the on line dictionary, this kind of dictionaries represent other source, that you can use for knowing new vocabulary and the correct meaning of unusual words Other and the most important tool is the internet, the internet had been helped me to improve English skills like Listening, to find images for my classes, one of the my favorite use of the internet is with the program Skype, I learned through this program the lifestyle of native speakers, idioms, and I improved my pronunciation of some words and obviously I improve a lot in Listening. The use of blogs is something that I am practicing; I like to have my on space, I like can share to my classmates my thoughts or opinions, like in this essay. I do not like to use a lot the internet for socializing; I do not like to share my personal information with people form other countries or people that I do not know. Finally about the use of e- mail, I consider the e- mail like the best and fast way for establishing communication, in my personal opinion is very useful and practical.
The use of electronics tools, is something hard to me, in really I do not like to use it, but I recognize their importance and the amazing things that we can do use it. The things that I love about electronics tools are: The meaningful time that you can save, looking for information, the quantity of information that you can handle, it does not matter the distance. Other program that I love about electronics tools, is the program named “Movie maker”, I consider this program something very interesting, because you can show all your creativity to others. About the things that I hate using electronic tools, is the strict use of computers, I really hate them, because sometimes it is complicated, for example is very common that, when you want to present a topic thought a power point presentation and the computer it does not work, or when is very hard to access to a specific webpage and it is impossible for a lot reasons. I consider that this is my main reason about to other kind of electronics tools I believe that I do not have problems.
The use of tools in my major is something basic and essential. I consider this like excellent, even I hate the computers, because if I will dedicated all my life to language teaching, I believe that there is not a better way for doing, using technology. The fact in the most of my subjects the use of electronics tools is essential and obligated. To create spaces like this blog and others is an excellent beginning for having close contact with the technology, because when the other subjects in next semesters demanded the use of technology of electronics tools we are preparing for using it. I know the program of other carriers in the country, that has the same purpose like my major, obviously with different name, and it does not include technology in its programs, something that I consider an especial opportunity for us.
As a conclusion I want to mention that, my main purpose in this and the following semesters is to improve in the use of technology and electronics tools. I need to be closer about their use, because that I mentioned before: “The use of electronics tools in the class room is the best way for teaching a second language”. I consider to this process like hard to me, but not impossible, there are things that I love and I hate about it, I have my personal point of view too, but also I recognize the importance of the electronics tools and all the wonderful things that you can do use it.
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Elyyy Very good essay!!
ResponderEliminarI like it a lot !!!
First let me tell you that you have a good introduction, in general the essay is very good, just carefull with some details.
In the second paragraph you missed "my" between improve and English skilss.
Second, watch out with reapeating words a lot, for example the word like in the last paragraphs you repeated it a lot and in some cases you are using it wrongly.
And in the 3rd or 4th paragraph and in the last paragraph, the last words you wrote "use it" and it must be using it.
I hope that my recommendations help you to get better your essay,!!!
bYEE pRETTY eLY !!
1. fortunately or unfortunately all the world is involve in this invent. Erase it.
ResponderEliminar2. Obviously all the aspects related with the (no the) electronic tools can be good or bad talking especially “of” the internet. It is easy to find a lot of useful information, pictures, books and more, (.) you can have communication with people around the world, you can create your own space for showing to the world your personality or your work (talking about academic areas), but everything has a dark side. Nowadays it is very common to find sites, where some people use the(no the) electronics tools in a negative way.
3. My experience using electronic tools is very conventional. I had been used the (no the) electronic tools
4. the internet had(have ) been helped me to improve(my) English skills like Listening, to(it could be my microteaching class) (. O)ne of (no the) my favorite use of the internet is (with) the program Skype,
5. I improve(ed) a lot in Listening. The use of blogs is something that I am practicing;
6. I like to have my (on) space, I like (can) share to my classmates my thoughts or opinions, like in this essay. I do not like to use a lot the internet for socializing; I do not like to share my personal information with people (form) other countries or people that I do not know. Finally about the use of e- mail,
7. I consider the e- mail (like) the best and fast way for establishing communication, in my personal opinion is very useful and practical.
The use of electronics tools, is something hard to me, (in) really
8. want to present a topic (thought) a power point presentation
The use of tools in my major is something basic and essential. I consider this like excellent, even I hate the computers, because if I will dedicate(d) all my life to language teaching,
9. I believe that there is not a better way for doing(it),
hi eli your essay is good the idea that you have about electronic literacy is ok. Just you need to check the words that I put in parenthesis because I think that those words were the mistakes that you have to correct in order to make your essay very good essay I know you can do it.