viernes, 4 de diciembre de 2009

MY INTRODUCTORY ESSAY FINAL DRAFT

OUTLINE:

INTRODUCTION: (paragraph 1)
• All the people and things that are part in my life now
(Who am I?)


PARAGRAPH 2:
• Likes and dislikes
(About music, places and people)

PARAGRAPH 3:
• Life experiences
(The troubles for choosing a major, and the challenge of studying and working at the same time)

PARAGRAPH 4:
• Plans for the near future
(Finish the major, to know London and get married)

CONCLUSION: (paragraph 5)
• Plans for the future in general
(Get a good job as translator and have a beautiful and comfortable house with my own family)
































What are the most important aspects now in my life? Definitely I consider this stage of my life, like the best, because now I am enjoy a complete life, now I have all the things that one day I dreamed. For example I have my entire family around me, my parents, my two brothers, my sister and a beautiful niece named Diana. I have the wonderful opportunity of having a good job, although, is not related with my major, I like it so much. Concerning my love relationship, also I feel very well, now I have an excellent boyfriend named Jorge, he changed my life and, the way that I see things, he is an excellent person and he is motivating me, as a result I feel a great love for him, very different like in other relationships. The economic and personal independence that I had been gained is another aspect very valuable for me. I really feel so happy.

About my likes and dislikes, I believe that all my life I have been complicated and very special for everything. About music: I like pop, it does not matter if is in English or Spanish, obviously there are specific bands or songs that I like most. About places: I prefer the quiet places near of nature but so far from the sun (I hate sun), like fields and big spaces with a comfortable hut, there I have the opportunity of have in contact with my thoughts; this kind of places help me to get calm and clarify my ideas. Talking about people this is the most difficult part, because for me, not all persons can gain my confidence or my love easily. All my life I have been looking for real people, without lies and false feelings, obviously to find this kind of people is so hard nowadays, that’s why I have few but true friends. Another aspect that it is important to mention, is that sometimes I feel very well alone, usually I look for moments only for me, I enjoy my own silence and space, however, if you need me, I will be there for you.

To talk about my life experiences, is easy to me, because I am living the results of my experiences everyday. I consider as life experience all the things that I lived, when I finished the high school. I had the conviction of study Journalism, but my parents did not support me, because the major was in Guanajuato, and my parents said a resounding not. At the beginning it was so hard to me, I remember that I cried and cried everyday. One day I decided to start and look for something motivating again. For this reason I am here studying B.A English Language Teaching and working at the same time, I believe that make this, undoubtedly it is changing everything for me, because now I know the meaning of the effort. My purpose: I want to reach out all the things that are important to me now and for my future life. I feel content, when every night I to come back to my home, obviously tired, but proud because I am a positive and working person, adjectives that I want to be all my life.

Concerning to my plans for the close future is something that produces a big smile in my face, because when I reach out my main plans it will be the signal of my own success. First I want to finish my major, if I finish the major, I will get the two most wished aspects in my life, everything it is related. After to finishing my major, my gold dream it is to know London, I would like to make this trip as a single person, I want to live the experience of know alone other country, to know other culture and have a good time. My third and the most important plan, it is to get married, I know that anything is sure, but, I have the illusion of get married, and my boyfriend too, we have a well structured plan for our future. Both believe that, when we finish our majors and to go to another country (live personal experiences), we will ready for being together all our life.


Obviously, when I reach out all the plans that said, the plans for the general future are near too. About my profession, now I am not sure, about if I want to work as a teacher, if this happen I would like to teach English in companies or Universities, but really I would like to be a translator of a magazine or an editorial, in this way I can to work a little bit in an area that I will love of my life, the Journalism. My second plan is to build a beautiful and comfortable house; I want to create and design a special place, where I will form my own family. Other thing that I would like to do, it is study the bachelor in Journalism, only to come true my wish. Finally I want to have a pacific life, I am not looking for a lot money or very expensive things, I only want to live calm and form my own family, I want to have a girl and a boy. Always I want to be a strong and loving woman that represents to my husband and my children effort and trust.

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